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My last submition for HALLOWEEN 2009, happy HALLOWEEN NEWGROUNDS !!!
I make this in base of a old book for childrens, but i change the end
lol, other front page :3 A MILLONS of thanks NEWGROUNDS

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no spam... me happy

lolz forget it...



well everything

was already said beneath me
proportions didnt really bother me that much, but yeah that close up face
lacked of detail like almost all of the rest

also at the end he puts out his wings ,right ,but in the next picture when hes summons the "whatever" they´re suddenly gone
and Wegee or however that meme is called didnt help a bit

so: lack of animatyons lack of story--thats not good enough for frontpage

2 for the effort



Drawings are really pour

You have a lot of potential, but really need to work on your drawings. You have somewhat interesting facial expressions and lighting, but when you get to animating it looks like a rough draft for a story board. Get some detail in there or something? And work on your proportions, the bodies were sometimes out of whack.



Righteous

I love how you are really talented with drawing excellent scenes, but have no problem with instantly dropping to the lowest of lowbrow. It's infinitely valuable. Tempted to hand out dicks on Halloween now too.


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3.26 / 5.00

Uploaded
Oct 17, 2009
5:05 PM EDT
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