I don't understand.
What was the plot? I saw a guy walking into a restaurant, a girl, then it ends.
These were okay, and I understand it is harder when you are using something other than Flash. Sometimes I didn't even know what things were supposed to be, but I was more impressed with the scene outside of the restaurant.
Most of it was very low quality, and the voices were pretty bad. I don't know if your program is at fault, or your microphone.
It wasn't very smooth at all. The walking looked good, but as your character walked into the restaurant, he became rather pixelated. Not to mention, the text at the beginning was pixelated as well.
Overall, 4/10, 2/5
I do believe you can make a better and longer animation. Maybe work in collaboration with someone. It was around 30 seconds long, not counting all the times it repeats. Work on all elements of your animation, improve them. Make sure it meets your expectations before you submit it, because if it doesn't, then I'm certain it won't meet your viewers' expectations.