You're a begginer so i'll go easy.
Overall, this sucks. But for your very first animation it's actually preety decent.
Thanks i guess..
Not too bad for your first flash.
It had potential, but I think overall the lack of sound is what killed it. The storyline was actually a pretty good idea. I would love to see a revision of this movie with sound, and possibly color. It should be longer, but other than that, this was pretty good.
Yeah my microphone sucks so i might have to buy a new one before any sound appears, i did do this in under an hour also