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Oct 15, 2009 | 7:06 PM EDT

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EDIT: Thanks so much for the frontpage! I've fixed a few things I found wrong with the file, mainly the preloader. Also, if I'd known this was getting frontpaged, I would have made a better icon for it, but I s'pose it's to late to change that now, as I couldn't find the option for it.

Here is a short I made last year that I wanted to finish, but then decided to tack on a dumb ending instead. You may or may not get some enjoyment out of it.



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Good for you!

Saw this one your deviantART congratulations on front page!

Knocked down one star because it was just a talking stack of pancakes... But you get the other 9 because it was hilarious..

PeteGrammarman responds:

JUST a talking stack of pancakes?! Yeah, okay, its not that impressive I s'pose. Thanks for the review!


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

liked it.

funny, no wonder this was frontpaged.

i love the ripping scene lol

PeteGrammarman responds:

Thanks you for the review, sir!


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


It went exactly where I thought it was going to go, but I'm glad it did. Sometimes predictability is a good thing I guess.

PeteGrammarman responds:

Thanks! Yes, it was predictable, but pancakes are meant to be eaten, sentient or not.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Pretty good, just 1 thing

The voice acting could have used a bit of work. The toast and the egg were fine, just when the pancake was screaming in pain I think you could have made it a bit more believable. Other than that I think it was pretty good.

PeteGrammarman responds:

Yeah, my main gripe with this is my voice acting. I did it all in one take and I had very little prior experience. Thanks for the review and I do plan on practicing!


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

nice one

And shouldnt u be working on ur next project rather than replying to every single comment >>

PeteGrammarman responds:

I'm replying to this one just to spite you.