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rated 3.80 / 5 stars
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Oct 15, 2009 | 7:06 PM EDT

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EDIT: Thanks so much for the frontpage! I've fixed a few things I found wrong with the file, mainly the preloader. Also, if I'd known this was getting frontpaged, I would have made a better icon for it, but I s'pose it's to late to change that now, as I couldn't find the option for it.

Here is a short I made last year that I wanted to finish, but then decided to tack on a dumb ending instead. You may or may not get some enjoyment out of it.



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Very nice

I like the animation and the voices a lot. I would only make a small suggestion to the viewer to also vieuw the part after the credits. Besides the music at the end is pure gold!


PeteGrammarman responds:

Yes, it is imperative that everyone watch after the credits! Thank you for the review and the advice to the watchers.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Dawww! Cute.

I chuckled at the "pamp"-cakes's mouth movements. The eyes were very cute as well. I knew what was going to happen at the beginning, so no shcok comedy there. (A talking pancake can only have a few things done to it.) The fast pace was actually good for this short. It had a plot so mind-numbingly dumb that you can't help but find it humorous, which was a good combination. I'd have to say the best part of this flash was your voiceover. Hilarious not in the words that were said, but in the voice and tone.

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PeteGrammarman responds:

Thank you! I suppose there is no shock value in eating a talking pancake...


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Great Work, one question.

How did you vision an egg as William Taft with a monocle?


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Good Flash.

GREAT voice acting (hence the 8 stars)
Good animation
Good Storyline

Overall good work, thanks for the flash.

PeteGrammarman responds:

No sir, thank you for the review!


Rated 4 / 5 stars


I reviewed this in the flash portal and it got front page +D lol. Anyway some criticism. The movie was very funny. I liked it when the fork and knife came in and the pancake started crying but when the toast came and said you need to be burnt it just just sucked. Still giving it an 8 out of 10 because it was good and funny except for those last 10 seconds or so.

PeteGrammarman responds:

Yeah, I really don't like where the cartoon goes either, and the ending is my least favorite part. Thanks for the review and criticism, it really helps me.