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EDIT: Thanks so much for the frontpage! I've fixed a few things I found wrong with the file, mainly the preloader. Also, if I'd known this was getting frontpaged, I would have made a better icon for it, but I s'pose it's to late to change that now, as I couldn't find the option for it.

Here is a short I made last year that I wanted to finish, but then decided to tack on a dumb ending instead. You may or may not get some enjoyment out of it.


You made my day

that made me laugh so much thanks you, you made my day with that XD good job

PeteGrammarman responds:

This is why I make movies, thanks for the review!


I loved their voices! The egg was probably my favorite. Well, I am specialized in voice acting. I would like to know if you may need a voice actor around the age of fifteen for any of your videos?

PeteGrammarman responds:

It depends on what I'm working on, but if I need a 15-year-old, you'll be the first on my list. Thanks for the review!

Simple and clean

It's great to see humor that doesn't have to be profane..but then again I guess imbeciles like allatreev down there can't be amused unless it's rated R. Oh well..some people just lack in intelligence I suppose

Funny vid,good work

PeteGrammarman responds:

Thanks, but don't be so hard on allatreev, I guess it just wasn't his cup of tea.

Pretty good, just 1 thing

The voice acting could have used a bit of work. The toast and the egg were fine, just when the pancake was screaming in pain I think you could have made it a bit more believable. Other than that I think it was pretty good.

PeteGrammarman responds:

Yeah, my main gripe with this is my voice acting. I did it all in one take and I had very little prior experience. Thanks for the review and I do plan on practicing!

sniff sniff

ill eat burned toast... xD

PeteGrammarman responds:

Yeah, I like my toast burnt too. Maybe the fact that it can talk is holding me back.

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Credits & Info

3.80 / 5.00

Oct 15, 2009
7:06 PM EDT
Comedy - Original