i......... i think you shouuld stop animating
you just dont care what you do
im sorry but
hang up your pencil
umm..... not there....
Animation and drawings might say it would look more artistic. But such a childish story with cheesy gore completely destroys it.
As I first saw it I thought- it might be some awesome animation, since it got such a music going. Maybe something classy or dramatic...
Instead stuff just go down. It got totally wierd when General and some "mega muscular monster" man comes in out of nowhere.. WHY!? where do they come from? Why you got that monster there, like some ANIME villians?
And then the ending, totally ruined it.
Dude! Utilize your animation skills. Looks awesome. But story is ... disaster, dude! ... Disaster!
it was good until the end
Talking needs work
you get a seven
Strange and provocative. Mmmmmmmm...
Now that's an example of the Butterfly Effect! Well animated, though it ended rather abruptly.
I liked it, although, don't be lazy... it had good detail until toward the end. Go back through and add detail.
Also if you don't know about objects in flash try learning about them, they speed things up so that you only draw something like an arm once. instead of once per slide.