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ernie the worm

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hey this is my VERY first animation, for a module project. PLEASE help me by giving postive / constructive critism (**,)

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Hmmm

Would love to give you positive or contructive critism but I suppose all I can say is come up with something that is atleast funny and maybe ur videos will do better in the future.

Remarks

You shouldn't abuse the TWEEN featires and what's with the sudden appeareance of the ladybug? Also make the background to loop smoother.

Hm...

Only criticism I can give is the shortness and death. It shood look more realistic. Easier way. Take away the blood. Make him stand on his tail straight with his eyes as Xs and just let him topple :D Apart from that, nice try!

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4,067
Votes
4
Score
3.69 / 5.00

Uploaded
Oct 13, 2009
7:31 AM EDT