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doofy shorts - episode 1

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this is a small cartoon im making this is a test if you have any ideas or think you can help just review below

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no sense

There is absolutely nothing

you lie.

shorts implies that there's more than one short. you know, since there's an 's' at the end of it. Simply putting more time into it would improve your score greatly.

Pretty poor.

I thought that was a pretty lousy animation to be honest. I personally don't understand how a policeman getting slapped and falling over is funny, at all. You animation was also really rather bad, i would suggest simply adding a few more frames and increase the frame rate to make it less choppy. Your drawing style (if you can call it a stye) is also terrible. I can understand, if you are trying to turn this into a credible series, that you want your characters to have a unique appearance (i.e. Madness Series, Weebl and Bob etc) but simply putting a few trapeziums together frankly isn't good enough. I suggest a serious reconsideration of character appearance and perhaps make it look like you spent a reasonable amount of time animating. The only thing i give you credit for is managing to synch the slap sounds properly with the animation.