GACK!
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You gave away the entire twist in your commentary. Don't do that.
Otherwise, it makes quite a statement. Very true to life! :D
Author Comments
It is like real life where no one wants to help people who are in need but in this case he is the stupid one that didn't knew about the city on the other side of the island.
Tekno's Opinion
Nice story, and well plotted... just keep on working on your drawings and animations, ok?
Hayes10 responds:
Thanks this is my first animation and I will work on my drawings.