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Another short animation I made today. Just follow the green dot and you'll be able to follow the action. I hope you enjoy it!
Review and Vote please!
I know it's a short and that you did it for fun, but it's really not something that's very good. I actually think that dot and/or stick animations can be very entertaining to watch. As practice, this is a good start, but as a submission it's not very good.
The animation was choppy and could be smoother. The biggest downer was the lack of detail in the background. It would have been nice to work on that and this submission would have been a lot better. Add some length and you actually have a pretty good piece.
I also noticed that some of the "damage" to the walls in the first scene went away after a few seconds. I believe that was probably an error. You did have some nice detail in the last scene where the lamp was swaying back and forth though.
Music was an alright choice and you did a good job on the sound effects.
It is indeed intriguing
While I do always enjoy people exploiting their artistic sides, I do strongly suggest that one develops their skill beyond...well, dots. While the concept is different than what I am used to seeing, it still left me wondering who the green dot was, why he was where he was, where he was, and overall, it left nearly everything to the imagination. I can not give a score to this that I feel would be decent.
Yeah. I do plan on developing a story to this. I'm sorry you feel my skills go as far as dots. That's why I tried to add a few things, such as a gatling gun, a smoking ash tray (which is easy to miss), rotation fan, swinging light, etc.
I hope the other guys ain't serious..
''I haven't seen something this unique'' Damn, no cause it's not a good idea.. This ain't unique.. This is even worse then Stick Figures.. How simple do you wanna have it?
''i like the animation story and music'' Damn, There is no story.. the animation is too simple and a little crap.. And i give a 3 outta 10 for the music, cause the music ain't that bad..
''Cool movie.'' Seriously? Cool?
I'm sad too watch where newgrounds is going these days...
At first, I felt bad that you didn't like my animation. Then, I went to your profile to see if you had actually tried to make a flash. Then, I saw that you hadn't and I lol'd. If people would learn to read. You'd see that I said short animation. That I didn't say there was a story to it. Was just for fun. And considering you've been a member since 05 and still are level 4..It's kind of embarassing to think I actually was offended by you.
i like the animation story and music
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