Below average/ Failing
~The way you draw is pretty interesting and in my opinion, great.
~It isn't annoying or random nor does it give me a reason to outright blam it.
~I had a problem with it before getting to watch it, there is no preloader.
~Adding to the frustration of the lack of a preloader, there is to replay button.
~Even more infuriating, there is no pause button, pause menu, replay button, scene select, audio control, nothing. From this menu alone MUCH is dependant. You must understand that without it I will not give you above an average unless your flash is distastefully short, and even then there must be a good reason and it must STILL have a preloader and a replay button.
~Even with your drawing skills, and as much as I hate critiquing this particular thing, your imagination needs improvement. The plot was boring, and the actions unaffiliated. This confuses me and does not make me care for Moplar.
~Moplar is generally uncaring of his surroundings and therefore can not be made to easily interact with other things, cutting most of what you can make a story out of.
Things that just are:
~Your flash is too short for me to give a review on the audio, plot, content, etc. with their own individual sections.
~I think this flash is more a showing of skill rather than your personal attempt at making something.
~If I were you, I would team up with a writer, I don't mean to sound harsh, but Business Co? Not to mention the references you needed to fall back on in movies, and don't try to hide the fact you used Kanye West.