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THE LAST FIGHT VERSUS THE HALLOWEEN... OR NOT IS THIS MOVIE ?
THX TOM FOR THE FROM P4G3

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Huh..

That actually was pretty good, the animation was alright, but flash wise you did a pretty good job. I don't see why people didn't like it

No sense of how flash works, huh?


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lol

it was good and then complete,ok? As in what in the world. lol. Good job on this.


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uh huh

it was different. and like the animation was crappy as hell (sorry) but the general idea was cool......up until the ending -_-'''



yes, but no...

very nice art style, good action scenes, great combination of those scenes...

but the ending was most disturbing. i do get the jokes, but it just doesn't fit.

it feels like your trying to copy people, whoms flashes have the same basics:
a flash about something, somewhere, etc. and in the end the is a weird, maybe sick turn in events. these are used to take the viewer by surpise, and make him laugh.
which again increases the chances of a positive vote.

this just doesn't work for you. even your characters reminded me of other things:
the bears looks like werwolf, er werbear versions of winnie pooh; and the pumpkin head somewhat reminded me of jack skelleton. the puns at the end may be overused, but still funny, if you use them right that is.

technically, i didn't like the anatomy of your characters. the heads seems to big for the bodies, the relation between height and width didn't seem right.
i don't know if this was on purpose, but i'm just saying.

anyways, you don't lack talent, maybe just ideas and improvement.
you now may think: ah heck, what the hell does he know about flashes?
i'm only trying to give you useful critic for your work. but one should never forget to praise what was well done.

for that i think you could ask your friends for ideas. or maybe they already have a story, which they'd like to see animated, but lack the possiblities to do so.
this would be a good win-win, don't you think?
and the problem with the atonomy is easily solved:
just try out sketching some things beforehand, with the good old pencil.
you could start off with only body parts:
hands for example. take your own for help. this way you can get a feel for sizes.

and always ask for second or third opinions, that always a good way to go.
that way you don't feel so pissed off when it happens that someone totally doesn't like your work, cuz you didn't do it completely yourself. may be a dick move, but it does make you feel better.

i guess that's about it. i hope this helps you in one way or the other.
please don't hate me, okay? ^^


Hulalaoo responds:

N****R , I GET A WACOM TABLET OF TOM FULP, AND 750 $ IN THE MADNESS DAY, I HAVE A ANIMATION IN THE TOP 50 (IN THIS MOMENT) AND YOU A STUPID N****R WITH NO SENSE OF THE ANIMATION SAY ME THIS SHIT ? YOU ARE A RETARD HOBBOS SON OF YOU GREAT RAPED BITCH MUTHERFUKERSHITED! STUPID, LOSER ! N****R !! NIIKKERHHEERRR !!! YOU ARE A SIMPLE STUPID USER OF SHIT, BACK TO YOU HOME, 20 YEARS ? YOU MOTHER SUCK MY BIG DICK, ASSHOLE ! GO TO SEE SHIT IN TWEEN STUPID ! MAKE A STUPID GOOD DRAW IS EASY, ONLY MAKE A DRAW STUPID IN BASE OF THE THEORY, BUT MAKE 20 DRAWS DIFERENTS FOR SECOND IS OTHER WORK, WITH MORE THEORY IS OTHER LEVEL OF WORK MORON, GO TO MAEK A PARALITY DRAW FUCKER


ooookkkaayy

very interesting, ill give you that.


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