for the first try?
not bad...you should try animate on flash...im sure ur animation can be more smooth than this
Author Comments
It's my first movie............I made it in flash mx so here's the results.....XD
thanks for watching it. I realized my animation is still a lot of flaws so please critique and suggestions ...
and this continued to be animated for the sequel I will try to fill the animated character's voice...
but if many do not like this video I will not continue .....x3
I used song with title "jangan menyerah" of D'masiv
hahaha........sorry my English bad
review below is part of the misunderstanding..... I was wrong ........ I actually using flash ..... author has improved comment
Kanatazeikyo responds:
gw salah tulis........maksudnya gw pake flash kok tapi gak begitu bisa begitu
I was wrong wrote author comment..... I really made it with flash
Alright I guess
Thestory is not bad. As the person said below your english isn't the best and you should really have someone check it over before putting it out there.
Um...
Please ask someone to help you with the English subtitles, they were really bad - also difficult to see, while the song subtitles at the top were distracting. In fact, it might be better to try to just tell the story through images.
Kanatazeikyo responds:
well .... I will improve my english .....
Overall pretty good submission
The drawing is good...The animation has its bad/awkward moments,but not too bad... However the translations get pretty bad,lol...
