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This is my 1st every flash submission to pass judgement! Thanks newgrounds! :D

Hello people, please judge fairly. I spent lots of effort together with some friends to come out with this HAND DRAWN stop-motion flip book. I hope you guys enjoy flip books. This is my 1st every flip book with 70 frames running at 5 fps.

After the flip book was done, I scanned and converted it into a flash animation.

Constructive Reviews are highly welcomed :D

Reviews


It reminds me of myself

This was not great, but it did have a certain appeal to me because it reminded me of back when I made sketches. A lot of us had those flipbooks that we used to make animations. The weakest point of this is probably that it is pretty short and not much happens. It is still cool because this style is in fact a model for us all to go by. The drawings were decent enough and the action was not half bad. I would suggest that next time you do something like that, you add in more action and explosions.



good

hey dude,no offense, this could be SO much better and ill tell u how.
its so easy but it takes 3 things:
1:Flash(DUH)
2:A Drawing pad to hook up to your computer
3:No life so you can continuously post things here (lol)
Hope to see some cooler stuff from u in the future!



Ok...

It needs some sound or music, or both. The animation is a bit choppy. There is a story present in your animation though. Hope to see smoother animation in the future. Good start, especially for hand-drawn flip-book animation.



Not good enough...

Newgrounds is a place for Flash. What you did is not Flash: it is some kind of flip book- thing.

So, i suggest you start learning real flash, like drawing, animating and programming, before you decide to submit something. Really.


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3,959
Votes
391
Score
2.82 / 5.00

Uploaded
Oct 8, 2009
11:46 AM EDT
Genre
Action
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