My 2 cents.

It didn't really make sense until the end, when you had to explain it in text. If you have to explain your flash with words instead of action, you might want to rethink it.

Also, the animation could have been a lot better, especially when the guy is eating.

Why is the black guy on the floor dead? Lol?

Nice try, but I would suggest working on the artwork and actions of the characters. Also make sure that your flash's point is self-evident; you should not have to explain it all in words.

lawl

i like it :D 5/5
10/10

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the guy throwing up a bunch of times made me laugh a bit. If you're just a beginner with Flash MX then this isn't too bad. This just wasnt my coup of tea;

weird srory line and bat graphics

I just dont like it. Bad Graphics. i'm not saying i could do it better, still, i dont like it

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not bat but upturn