anormal day

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it is a animation with some sounds, and a music, on this movie, you see "scary" and funny parts, this is a movie different from the others...

what do you think of it?

if you want leave your commentary (remember i always answer to your commentaries even if is good or bad)

well, HAVE FUN!
diogoshx 2009 mini-productions

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My 2 cents.

It didn't really make sense until the end, when you had to explain it in text. If you have to explain your flash with words instead of action, you might want to rethink it.

Also, the animation could have been a lot better, especially when the guy is eating.

Why is the black guy on the floor dead? Lol?

Nice try, but I would suggest working on the artwork and actions of the characters. Also make sure that your flash's point is self-evident; you should not have to explain it all in words.

diogoshx responds:

of course not, the guy on the floor represents the violence of this days...
yeah the artwork i use here was the "dodllez " style, a little bad and stuff, normaly i do better but this time i do an animation diferent... with this grapichs a little weird...


i like it :D 5/5

diogoshx responds:

oh yeah


the guy throwing up a bunch of times made me laugh a bit. If you're just a beginner with Flash MX then this isn't too bad. This just wasnt my coup of tea;

diogoshx responds:

well i am not a "begginer" i dont use flash mx i use flash cs3!
this was just something...

weird srory line and bat graphics

I just dont like it. Bad Graphics. i'm not saying i could do it better, still, i dont like it

diogoshx responds:

hm ok i understand


not bat but upturn

diogoshx responds:

hm yeah i try to upgrade my animations skill when i have time :D

Credits & Info

4.05 / 5.00

Oct 4, 2009
9:21 AM EDT
Comedy - Original