My 2 cents.
It didn't really make sense until the end, when you had to explain it in text. If you have to explain your flash with words instead of action, you might want to rethink it.
Also, the animation could have been a lot better, especially when the guy is eating.
Why is the black guy on the floor dead? Lol?
Nice try, but I would suggest working on the artwork and actions of the characters. Also make sure that your flash's point is self-evident; you should not have to explain it all in words.