I'm not putting 10/10 'cause it's wonderful.
It's great. Well animated. But not the best thing I've ever watched.
But still. I was looking for stuff about Alice for a couple of minutes. Then I stopped. There was this link on Purgy's newspost and I followed you. And then realized you've made something about Alice in wonderland. So I'm surprised. (I'm french, and it's late. So I'm sorry if this post seems a lil' disturbing. I haven't reread it)
And now I like you x)
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I noticed there werent a lot of Alice in Wonderland videos on newgrounds and decided to make my own version.
I made this for my animation class and I know the drawings arent very good I had to rush because I had a due date and finished just yesterday.
A little over a month it took me.
The music doesnt always match because I thought I fixed it and when I made it into a swf the music changed a little bit, and WHATEVER you do, DO NOT pause it or else the music will keep going lawl.
I fail at codes but I love animating, I just learned how to use the filters btw ^_^ I kind of abused them. XD
So I made another attempt to create a play button, no luck at all.. I think I am mentally retarded, I look in the book to see how and I did it I even got to clicking it... but I still had some issues.Im still working on it not sure what I'm doing wrong though. : /
BTW I got the soundeffects from findsounds, a website that saved my ass a little : D
Again, please dont bash me on not making a button I really want to learn but for some reason Im doing something wrong, not sure what it is but Ill try to work on that during class.. @_@ I feel retarded.
I know from my last submission i needed a play button
I guess I should let you know why the art work is scratchy, I used a mouse to draw it all, if I had a tablet I would have been able to make it a little bit more well, I guess less tweening I should say would be involved.
The very first song is Stabbing Westward - Darkest Days
Nice!
very good job the animations the music very thing was awesome
not bad at all
I feel it a bit slap-dashed, but it'll have future. If you'd try to improve the drawings, make it longer and do an adventure game from it (with some voice acting), I believe everyone would like it.
Maybe alice Can Use a 9 year old Girl Voice?
I do voicing just let me into any voice chat record and wala.you get a 9 year old girl voice,but i feel like alice,now i know what im going to do when i get on my fav site.
Considering all details...
It was dark and nice to watch but you really need to work on...
1. a play button
2. better drawing animation. (some people can draw well with a mouse!)
But kudos for...
1. story line
2. some sound effects
3. overall mood
Syringes responds:
Yea drawing with a mouse is easy but animating is really haaard D:
But thanks! I have a tablet now so no more excuses for me haha.
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Daily 5th Place October 1, 2009