AWESOME NICE VID MAN
man what a way to die :P, ace i think, i was rofling AND I THINK THIS IS THE BEST VIDEO I HAD ALL DAY WOW OLD BUT COOL I GIVE 9/10 BUT CONGRATS
adorei bom trabalho :D
principalmente os cenarios...
i mean good work people
Overall: Very Good
- Good story line
- Decent visuals
- Too much reliance on talk
- Characters somewhat stiff
On a literature-hosting website I was frequently told to "show-don't tell". I guess an example of this in flash on Newgrounds would be "Engineered".
Loved seeing it all come together. Great work with the animation, clearly your best work yet, and the work you put into makes it look great! There is always room for improvement, myself included, but I think this series is only going to get better and better over time. Glad to be a part of the team, and now that I have a better quality mic it will be that much more awesome!
Simple and I like it! Keep up the good work!
I think you did a great job with the camera to make the flash energetic and simple. The animation was pretty good not the best ever but good enough that I could get into the story. The flash left me wanting to see pt2 and the timing of events seemed just right.I also think the music you ended with was a very good choice. I watched this on low volume so I the volume change at the end did not bother me at all rather seemed just right. However, I would suggest balancing out the sound and comparing it to other newgrounds flashes to make sure the sound level is perfect.