hey!!!
yo maybe you and me can join up and make a flash movie!
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Hey thanks for viewing! Just a short that im struggling with. Feedback would be cool if you have the time and something constructive to say. I know this is going to get deleted but i needed to demonstrate this for a friend.
-Coda
CodaNinja responds:
at the moment i'd be wasting your time- but maybe when i get better we can work something out.
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At least you got the passage mark XD
But really: quite ok, just the left (from our point of view) eyes when he look down is in my opinion, to bold...
Maybe the hand has something abnormal. And I know myself it's the hardest part to draw...
CodaNinja responds:
yeah its true, its partially obscured too so i cant judge its mass properly. still you noticed it so i guess i better sharpen that shit up. cheers for the review matey.
Hmm...
Its all about potential i guess, so u can animate blinks, now make a full out version. ;D
CodaNinja responds:
Thanks for the review! I hope you like it when it has plot and colour!
man
what do you do?
CodaNinja responds:
lol suck at flash? Thanks for the 7 bro!