Sound and depth
Those are my only two problems with this flash. I like the artwork though, and I hope to see the completion of this project soon.
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I finall yfinished it please enjoy its for my series im working on
WolfsBaneSeries responds:
Thanks i will add sound.
I dont think ill add depth to this video sorry. but i will try for later videos thank you.
Not bad, but...
...would've been better with sound. Unless of course you're making some sort of statement regarding hearing loss or happen to be deaf yourself. Definitely make more, though, you have got the knack for it. :-)
WolfsBaneSeries responds:
Thanks.. And im not deaf.
Well done
I liked it overall.
-Pros: You say this is an original character? That's definitely a plus. You had wonderful eye detail as well. Every time I see a flash drawn like this, I'm amazed at the level of detail and time it obviously took to make. Did you draw every frame on this? Going frame by frame, it looks like you did.
-Cons: Like you mentioned, you have some movement issues. I don't like how the character looped in the crawl portion. I didn't like seeing the character roll suddenly in the beginning chase sequence either. I don't really see how that factors in the chase and the movie moves so quickly that it really takes away from the quality of the work. I wasn't quite sure what the thing was that passed the screen after the hawk flew away. The feather was a little too wide to be to scale, but I see what you were trying to do there. It would've been nice to have a replay button on here too, though I realize it's not finished.
-Suggestions: Fix those movement issues! I know it may be a pain in the butt to do, but once you fix them, people will like it a lot more. Consider limiting her crawl sequence to two loops. With two, the looping will be less noticeable. Also consider scaling that feather down. Other people might also be confused as to what it is. Make sure to remember a replay button on your finished one.
*I look forward to seeing what kind of surprises you have in store, as well as what other characters you have.
WolfsBaneSeries responds:
The background revolving was drawn by me along with all movements but some backgrounds stayed the same and yes. no gifs or anything no buttons. all frame done.
I know the grass want the best but it wa normally and supposed to be a fun little animation but it turned into a hunting scene. Sorry it was a feather from the hawks wings. The feather was zooming in. And soory i'm not good at rodents like rabbits and mice. Yeah i will add a start and end button once i finish the main animation.
good start
You have a well-drawn wolf and seeing him chase after the rabbit was a lot was a lot of fun to watch. Everything looked great and you have a good eye for detail. I might add some music in back ground and look forward to the finished version.
