needs work
The animation was crappy, not to sound rude but you should have had jazz help you with it. Audio was a little messed up, but i understand you werent going for that. The story line could have been better, i did like the concept tho, going into a mad house only to find it all bright and bubbly on the inside, i did like the puppy part that made me laugh, i gave you a three because i laughed, and i gave you a 4 cause you were working with jazz and i figured that this was more than likely your first animation, and also because you gave an effort. Just get better thats all i can tell you, keep working and you will be a great animator in no time, all and all good attempt guys.