it's a little fast though...
Yeah. its pretty fast
I guessing its probably a first or something along those lines, but it really needs to be slowed down a bit and it was a bit short.
Yes it my first movie, Next chapter will be slower
Slow it down a little
This is good for a first movie. Try to slow it down a little, as the dialogue goes by far too quickly to read. Also, instead of music, you may want to add sound effects to add more to the movie.
Ill try that in episode 2, and thanks