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AOZAR Ep.1 Dance Dance!

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Heres my first flash movie i know its about me and my cousin (but with sticks)

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pretty good

it's a little fast though...


exzeta responds:

Yeah. its pretty fast


Keep Tryin'

I guessing its probably a first or something along those lines, but it really needs to be slowed down a bit and it was a bit short.


exzeta responds:

Yes it my first movie, Next chapter will be slower


Slow it down a little

This is good for a first movie. Try to slow it down a little, as the dialogue goes by far too quickly to read. Also, instead of music, you may want to add sound effects to add more to the movie.


exzeta responds:

Ill try that in episode 2, and thanks

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3,797
Votes
269
Score
2.54 / 5.00

Uploaded
Sep 20, 2009
10:30 PM EDT
Genre
Comedy - Original
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