A good idea...
Failed because of bad artwork.
Cheers, though be reminded I'm just beginning and it's not traditional animation and I don't have full ActionScript experience. There we go. Happy happy!!!
Definately something different.
Wasn't quite sure what to make of this and the animation left plenty to be desired, keep working at it!
Thanks! Next episode will hopefully be better! :D Cheers.
an A for effort
i can see you must have put quite a bit of effort into this, not bad. the plot could be just a little longer, i did'nt really understand exactly what was going on in the time it played, i jut got the idea
the drawings seemed off in some areas, but i dont blame you, flash is alot harder to make look good ^w^
i like how this is set in the near future, it adds a bit of wonder to the story,
so 3/5 + 8/10 :3 not bad
Thanks, yep. Don't worry, I'm still experimenting with flash and I'm going to fix up everything I've done wrong here in the next episode without explaining everything at face-value. Keeping the solution to a mystery to my self...
i don`t really want to ready all that make audio
Yeah, I know. The audio sucks. But don't worry!!!!