I sympathize with the guy, but...
I was really ready to give this a 9 or 10, but that ending killed it for me. A bit of a cliffhanger, no?
I'd love to see you explore this story again, hopefully with a better ending next time.
Sorry! Thanks for watching.
I liked it!
Needs a little work. The music seemed... meh, but it flowed well. Beautiful art!
The music was an afterthought, so I can't argue with that. Thanks for watching!
Great Job on this, seriously. If I were him i'd have pulled a Philip J. Fry and rocked it up in the future though, going back in time would cause Paradoxes, If he talked to the chick and got her back, she would have broken up with his past self, causing him not to have ever gotten to where he was in the future with her, so in essence he wouldn't have gone back in time in the first place.
Maybe that's what happened! It's entirely possible that his time travels are the reason he doesn't reappear right away. Thanks for watching!
what I beliave spanio was doing was showing you that he knew what he had to do, so you know that and then it has the perfect ending where he hits past like you just realized before and he disappears either way he learned from his mistakes and risked everything to make things right.
You're pretty much right on top of what I was going for. Thanks for watching!
does he get her back, or end up in the dark ages???? this need an ending
The "ending" allows you to consider this question. But it should also create in you a sense of unease... a feeling that should resonate with your own life to make you consider how you balance those you love with that which you wish to do. Thanks for watching!