wow
have the characters had parts missing,
the animation wasn't to good either
try harder dude.
Author Comments
This is my second submission to Newgrounds, I as before provided the Audio (Yes thats me rapping), and PunchJ did the animation. I want to give a thanks to PunchJ, he didn't have to colab with me, but I am definatly happy he did. Essentually this is the information concerning the song:
Artist: M_T
Producer (aka. maker of the instrumental): Qurate-L
Album: The Forgotten EP
Label: Mix'D Bloodz Records
Animator: PunchJ
Hope people like it, and PLEASE VOTE!
Side note: if anyone wants to colab, let me know.
m-t-online responds:
English please?
thats pree good
That was pree good just a little repetitive with the 2 7 2 syllables but other then that it sounds like you will go far at raping. and also do you have any other songs? if so post them i would like to hear more of you. .....................................
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m-t-online responds:
i have lots more songs, pm me and i can send you a link
hm.
the rap was actually decent despite its flaws. i liked it somewhat. it has a lot of potential, just needs some work on the timing and such. it sounds pretty raw in its form right now. the animation was good though. the beat was average, nothing fancy but gets the job done. the lyrics i liked, but there were some parts where you flowed through them weirdly. try to make it more natural speaking instead of seperating the syllables.
even though i liked what it could be, understand that i have to rate it down for its flaws. no offense. just keep working at it man, 9/10 for potential, 3/5 for flaws (didn't want to hurt the score at all.)
m-t-online responds:
well thank you
i liked the animation
the rap was kinda lame though, the beat was wayyyy to repetitive 2 syllable, 7 syllable, 2 syllable, 7 syllable and i don't quite understand the story your trying to paint with your selection of lyrics but i again i do like the animation. sorry for the criticism its just i took so many classes on successful lyricism and i don't understand what you were trying to get at.
m-t-online responds:
well that song is 4 years old, and its about living in a communist world.Saying everyone SHOULD be equal, but yet we live in a capitalist word, and thus we have homelessness etc. Also there are references to past music I have done, and a reference to my old rap group.
shiit man
I\m giving you a 4 just for the animation because it was not to badly done. but please please dont put these raps on the web man, your using the same bars over and over again(if you dont know what that means it means the same rythme) get right blabla get right its the same tempo and your timing is off, voice is goofy, lyrics are like a 13 year olds and it lacks any uniquness. but i mean good try and all cool animation i guess
m-t-online responds:
I'm sorry I don't rap about bitches and hoes like 50 Cent. Here in Canada we have stayed true to what rap is all about, and that is about sending out a message and being true to what you believe and not selling out to make money. Don't get me wrong, I have my commercial tracks too, but for the most part, underground rappers like to send a message. Sorry, just for you I will make a song about my Air Force 1's.