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Detective Jacob Fischer

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This fast-paced, noir-styled detective action movie was made in a resolution of 400x300 pixels. It took about three days to make. Animation / Voices / Musical accompaniments were all done by UNADON within this timeframe. Also, it is my first flash in about 8 years, so the way it turned out rather pleases myself.

I hope you enjoy, and appreciate commentary of any sorts. If wanted there will be a sequel, incorporating constructive criticism.

- UNADON

NOTE: VIEWED BEST WITH HIGH-SPEED BROWSERS SUCH AS GOOGLE CHROME. IN MY EXPERIENCE ANY OTHER BROWSER (IE, FIREFOX) SLOW DOWN THE MOVIE UNFORGIVABLY. THE IMPORTANCE OF TIMING IS NOT TO BE UNDERESTIMATED.

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Wait, what ?

Was that some bad parody of a noir-themed polar, or was it a real noir-themed movie, it's surprisignly unsettling, as theme mixes are somewhat rare on this site.

Anyways, the quality was kind of crappy, but the story and overall feeling out of this movie is strange, but in a good way.

UNADON responds:

i am glad this has reached its foremost objective, i.e. to cause confusion. otherwise thank you for your review, duly appreciated.

not to bad

The animation was bad and the lack of color was offsetting, but it was still good.

UNADON responds:

cheers. I'll be sure to add some color in my next endeavor.

Not the greatest, but a quality job anyways!

The animation isn't quite as good as it could be, but I did rather like it. Darn good job with the voice acting.

UNADON responds:

Thanks!

goood-ish

humour was good
a bit slow paced tbh
drawings were pretty okay
needs a bit more colour ............or less white if it's trying to be black and white

butttt
needs lip synching (although i enjoyed that joke too)

sound effects not great......

voice acting was pretty okay i guess

work on backgrounds
cleaning up the graphics
more animation like drawing each frame
sound effects and your story was good but you shouldn't have made him tell us about the wife at the start we should've had to deduce that or something
clean up the presentation too .....
other than that I enjoyed it
keep it up
fiachra hackett

UNADON responds:

thank you, lots of great feedback.

Well....

Average...same as half.

Credits & Info

Views
3,737
Votes
7
Score
2.31 / 5.00

Uploaded
Sep 15, 2009
5:08 PM EDT
Genre
Action