goood-ish
humour was good
a bit slow paced tbh
drawings were pretty okay
needs a bit more colour ............or less white if it's trying to be black and white
butttt
needs lip synching (although i enjoyed that joke too)
sound effects not great......
voice acting was pretty okay i guess
work on backgrounds
cleaning up the graphics
more animation like drawing each frame
sound effects and your story was good but you shouldn't have made him tell us about the wife at the start we should've had to deduce that or something
clean up the presentation too .....
other than that I enjoyed it
keep it up
fiachra hackett