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made w pivot don't bitch. it also has an api flash add in it so tell me if there's buge

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epic but..

why would a guy take all the wepons and stuff but get the fuck kicked out of him at the end by a unarmed guy i still like your animation and can you teach me how to get a preloader P.S. pls make a part 2

Pretty good...

I liked the animation, but your spelling... work on that, buddy, kk?
Everithing else, good!

m103904 responds:

kk ty and yeah thats me with out spell check

Needs some work

Let's start with the basics - You need to work on the spelling, as there are plenty of errors here. Weapons are semi-automatic (not simi) and others besides. You can download spell checkers for free, so have a look and give one of those a shot. Failing that, you can download a dictionary for Firefox and use that one, if you need to ;)

Subtitles tend to look better if they are within a bar at the bottom of the screen - yours tend to look a little out of focus, which is perhaps a problem from the video converter software.

The animation isn't that bad and I'd certainly like the look of seeing this taken further, because the ending looked a little abrupt. It can be longer and give us more of a cliffhanger. Perhaps more research, by watching things like Madness and XiaoXiao would help your productions further.

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m103904 responds:

thanks i rushed w the spelling and the words were made in paint. the movie was made w pivot.


Not bad. Not bad at all. I liked alot of the action. Thats about it though. Plot was...I dunno. Oh and btw spell check.....

m103904 responds:

ik u and like 5 other people said that and the movie was made in 08 i got better w spelling. ty fo da review


I guess it's okay, for a pivot.

m103904 responds:

ok T.T

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2.81 / 5.00

Sep 14, 2009
7:42 PM EDT