DBZ: Piccolo's Problem

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This is My 2nd time Submitting, So I hope it's recieved well. If you don't like DBZ and your watching this.. I gotta ask.. why are you watching it? haha

So I made this Video with camron23 http://camron23.newground s.com/ .

The idea was both of ours, we both refined the idea together and extended on it. I did all the voices for it, but I didnt have the skills to animate it.. The very 1st concept was camrons, and I took that and extended on it, and used his original character "Kazoo". I wrote the script for it (which was alot of improve actualy)

This is also posted on youtube, on his page feel free to stop by and comment on there as well if you like =D

Camron on youtube http://www.youtube.com/us er/camron2342
Me on youtube http://www.youtube.com/us er/Trixen01

Lets hope you guys like it! Its longer then my 1st submission at least!


dude seriously

THAT was funny. i would have never thought of that. i do have an idea for an animation that i couod share with you :) dbz based. it would be quite funny. but good work here. very good work.

It's funny...

Funny, but not a daily top really...

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Trixen responds:

Alright :(

good stuff

dude your shit is bad ass. . .please for the love of all that is good in this world keep it comin, but that kazoo thing. . . lets never speak of it again.

its ok

not the best but its ok

Good Effort, Not Very Funny IMO

Nice job with the music and echo -- it does sound a lot like DBZ. I used to watch the show when I was a kid, but got tired of it some time in middle school when I realized it was kind of lame and everything that happened took about 5 times longer than it should have.

Visually, you did a good job animating Piccolo, but it got boring staring at his face for such a long time. Also, his expression didn't seem to match what was going on in his head, with the exception of the retarded face he made every time "Kazoo" spoke. I'm guessing that's because you made this in cooperation with your friend and ad-libbed a lot of it. However, since it's all just shots of Piccolo's face and he reverts back to a blank expression between making faces, I don't think it would have been too hard to do a little editing to put in more appropriate expressions.

Your "Kazoo" character's voice sounds like a bad impression of someone from South Park, and what he actually says didn't make me laugh. Maybe if I was 12 and still liked the series, his contrast to my impression of Piccolo would inject some humor into the animation, but I'm not, and it didn't. Aside from that contrast, I don't think the character had any funny qualities, and don't really get why people seem so enthusiastic about this. I'm not trying to be mean here, I'm trying to give you constructive criticism so you can improve upon what you've produced here in your 3rd submission. The idea was funny, or would be to fans of the series, but you probably could have plotted out some more entertaining dialogue -- it might have helped if you used (along with your own voice) other people to voice some of the characters.

You ask why someone who doesn't like DBZ would be watching this -- it's because enough people who apparently _do_ like DBZ watched and rated it for it to show up as something with a "great score." I thought I'd check it out. It's not as if something about DBZ can't be funny to people who don't like the show -- it's just that this, in my humble opinion, doesn't fit that criteria. Good effort, but in the future you should build on your good ideas (in this case, a doofy guy in Piccolo's head) instead of relying on the idea itself to carry your animation.

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4.47 / 5.00

Sep 14, 2009
5:07 PM EDT
Comedy - Parody
  • Daily 4th Place September 15, 2009