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Red Kira

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Sep 13, 2009 | 11:36 PM EDT

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Well, besides some Madness fan-art, this is my first NG upload. It's short, only 15 seconds or so, and theres no buttons because i have no actionscript knowlege, but please enjoy anyway!! This may be the first of a series, If I can find the money for the full version of the program. I'm now using a free trial. Since I'm not a pro, try not to give me ratings that are REALLY BAD! Thanks! I'm open to suggestions for the final name, if this is to be a series. Please PM me if you have a suggestion. I am "greenpurplelampshade" on Youtube, so if you see this on there don't be concerned. One last thing: My friend did the first several frames in this movie, and let me do the rest. He is Thundershadow1.2, I think. ENJOY THE VIDEO! --Luigibob



Rated 2 / 5 stars

Good start.

Not a bad sample of animation by any means. The lack of audio and everything else is kinda bad, however. What is nice about this piece, though, is that it shows you have some skill. So get to it already, and put a more polished piece together. =P

luigibob responds:

Yes, i will, but as i only had 14 days trial, (not that this too k 14 days, maybe more like 3 hours), Ill make a better, longer, piece. IF i get the money for the full program. when i do, i promise ill make more ^_^


Rated 2 / 5 stars

good start

This is a good start to an animation. If this was made with Adobe try smoothing it out a little by either adding frames, or using smaller movements for the characters. The characters also seem to float a bit, so you could make the jumps a little quicker. Just a couple suggestions.

luigibob responds:

Thanks, i appreciate it, and yes i did notice it was kind of "slo-mo" ish in some parts...


Rated 3 / 5 stars

its smooth but thats it

Aight Im working on stick animations right now as well. I like the smoothness of your tweens but sticks really fly in potential when used in fbf. Like its a good framerate but theres no intense anticipation actions that really make the sticks go flying far or fast, you know what i mean? We live in such a day and age that we all are accustomed to being entertained really quickly and if were not then we look at someone else. Good job, but you need to speed things up. Hope this helps!

luigibob responds:

yes, the AVI format was much faster, and although I tried to up the frame rate, it didnt work very well. Worry not, though, I was planning on updating it/adding a preloader this weekend.


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars


I think the genre of stick fighting died with the Xaio Xaio series. Not too horrible, animation was actually pretty solid, but no sound and the short run time equals out to a little less than mediocre. Try a little harder man, i'm sure you can make some cool shit, this animation really looks promising.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

very good

It was very smoothly done and all but it really could have used some sound, music and to be much longer and maybe more enemys. other then that, good job.

luigibob responds:

Yeah... as ive said this is maybe the first of a seires. If/when i get the money fr the full version, i promise ill make more, improved ones.