close, reeeeaaaaal, close.
im a stickler for spelling and grammar and it really bugs me when things dont make sense in a sentence and the language is just weird. i love the graphics and the story is not terrible, but if you're gonna put that much effort into the graphics then i'd try and match it with the level of english competency haha. otherwise great job.
Same as me, but I'll admit to my (very strict) English teacher, I didn't make a first nor a second draft :D I let myself go this time. I'll make sure not to let that happen again. Thanks for the review ^.^
Here is what I think...
Tacos are tasty! But in a taste challenge, chicken would totally win.
x3 any food is great for me! Thanks for the review :D