hey...
do u have any characters in Bera we should hook up sum time pm me I like to have a chat! or if you have 1 in Galacia either way pm me back if you want to hang.
Author Comments
Originally named Disregarding Italian Cheese, this is an intro to what i hope to make into a small series. If you're a little confused now, things will be much better when *ahem* Ibay delivers the electronic briefing notebook.
Tell me what you think :D and yes, the audio was somehow messed up with exporting. Gotta fix that somehow...
(Trivia: My first movie with sound effects! :D)
runescapeop responds:
I'll message you my details :]
It was all right
Not bad, could have been longer and more action packed. I see that you are improving though so I favorited you. Keep up the great work!
runescapeop responds:
Just as I hope it to be. The new episode is coming along a bit slow (T.T) but i can tell already it's not one of my more... bland animations :D also since you seem to like Touhou, I decided to look up and i found a way to make Maple touhou sprites for Reimu :D Any suggestions on who else i should use? :O (I'm only a 3/8 Touhou fan x3
its ok
it was good sounds where ok and you used to nexon gamess here mapelstory and mabinogi(yes i know what it is)and over all good
runescapeop responds:
Thanks :D and yes, I used Bannedstory and Pseudo Character simulations for most of my animations. If I could draw, I would no doubt make gourmet (heh) animations but sadly my sisters an artist and I'm the computer weirdo :3 Thanks again for your review :D
Cool
Not a fan of sprites but it was cool to watch. Sound effects were cool and the convo was a little long at times
runescapeop responds:
Thanks! ^.^ I'm just glad i worked out well... In more ways than one :D
Suggestion and Oppinion
In the beginning, found the dialog to be a bit uninteresting due to length. To be honest, by the time the fighting started, I was ready to call it quits, but fortunately for me, watched on and was surprised to see that your fight scene was impressive, and shows that you have great potential.
What started as a 2 jumped to 5 quality with that fight scene. Revamp your story a little, and throw in more action and I'd follow you through every episode you plan to make.
I agree with the last few reviewers on more emotion and animation on the stand-stills, but it seems you've already planned to add that.
All in all, I vote 4 out of 5. Thanks for the awesome flash.
runescapeop responds:
Thanks for the review ^^ and since it was the prologue, I figured I should explain what's going on. Now I know: Never do it again. Also, i should have put a skill explaination at the beginning. The skill Lingering Rain was meant to stop time while the user creates a cloud of darts, then restarts time. Sorta like a slow version of the Wa Zarudo short. I'll put the skill tree in next time :D
Thanks for your review~
