the no sound ruined it.
it could've been funny.
fix it up man!
I give you a one, for taking the time to upload it.
I'm going to blam this, but only because...
...I think just a LITTLE BIT of spit & polish (and some sound, if you can) would make a major difference. I actually kinda think it's cute, but not quite ready for prime time as-is. At least make it stop looping so that you have to click a "replay" button or something to make it play again. Sound would be wonderful, though, if you can swing it. Not bad, otherwise! :-)
at first i thought it was going to make me laugh cause the art work was amusing, but there was no sound and it was a completely disturbing flash