Aww
I started to choke back a few tears when he said no.
The animation could be improved, but you got the point across beautifully. Good job!
And the penguins were absolutely adorable!
Author Comments
Kiwi:
Hello. (:
This is the beginning of a collection of flashes that AznCafe will be making.
I'm a bit new to all of this, so forgive me if I did something wrong during the submitting process.
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This isn't necessarily my first flash, however I'd like to think of it as my first "real" flash.
Critiques are appreciated, but don't be too harsh. (:
Welp~ I'm holding my breath.
AznCafe responds:
It really makes it worth it when I get comments like that. (:
Thank you very much. ^_^
is that a true story?
the animation wasn't very good, but i liked the idea. if that is a true story... well... i hope you have a strong heart to endure... wish u luck
AznCafe responds:
I agree, the animation is a bit sloppy. My next one will be better. (:
It is a true story, but it happened over half a year ago and my feelings have changed.
Thank you very much~ ^^
Wow...
Reminded me of my situation right now, I can say it "moved" me a little, If you were looking to touch feelings of ppl, well it worked with me...
Althought the art mas kinda "basic", it shown what it wanted to show and i dont think i could ever do better... so well, good job on everything!
AznCafe responds:
Good luck on that situation. It's nice to know I plucked a heart string~ ^^
Thank you. (:
Basically..
Was a brillitant animation and yepp more frames and try choose a less scratchy music although it fitted brilliantly and choose a better text. Great for a first try and basically putting the words FREINDZONED into mind kinda annoys me. Its normally the girl Freindzones you xD
AznCafe responds:
Thank you. (:
pretty cool
reminded me of alladin/kingdom hearts lol
the profile drawings of the characters coulda been better but other than that i liked it! :]
AznCafe responds:
Hahaha, yea, I think of that too.
Thank you. (:
