Hmm, a few changes and we're there
Not a bad piece overall - I can see that this particular entry would benefit from a subtitles bar, as jumping around the screen to click the speech bubbles to advance the text. I think that a button on the bar would suffice to advance the text in that respect.
The plot is workable, but could use a few tweaks, to make it less linear. Perhaps have the guy that killed the skeleton get back up after he died, or something, like a recurring villain, perhaps.
It's got some great potential, so keep working at it and hopefully the next one will be better :)
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...yhu ruined the secret for the next one
he's just injured,but he gets killed at the end of the next one
Secret ruiner >:o
lol just kidding, but i'm making a way better one
on its way to become good
the act dead part was good and also u added some speech thats good and u added the save the world part .
better then the first one i hope u can still go better than this good luck on your next one
PS:if u are learning how to do flash then after finishing the skeleton series i hope u can make stuff like that but in flash.
yea for the next one im going to tell the whole story then after that i'm going to make a game
befefit of the doubt
i only gave this a 2 because everything else suck massive balls today
it was ok
it just wasnt great