Meh....

It starts off very slow, and the movements are slow, kinda like the whole movie is lagging a bit. If I were you, I run through this project again. Also, choose a better background, it really doesn't do the characters any justice. Meaning; the pixels of the background should match up perfectly with pixels of the characters. Don't get me wrong, I like the idea of what your getting at, but fixing glitches of your flash movie, that has to be the third most important thing after finishing the movie and writing the flash script.

A lot better

I think you're doing much better just seeing your past stuff. Keep going. I know I haven't done any animating or such, but I appreciate what animators make. Keep it up and push yourself.

It's......well

It's ok just try better next time maybe musi would help

your doing fine. for starting out

my biggest complaint is that you should make it end, not loop. like have a replay button at the end of the sequence. maybe other little things, like...make the waterfalls actualy moving would be cool, simple hopefully and just another thing for you to try out. furthering your abilities. but other then that. its cool. i say good job and keep it up.

This is better?

I'd hate to see what your past entires were like. Keep trying, I guess. I can't imagine your sprites being any LESS fluid or your sound affects any MORE annoying from practice.