Most of the animation was good, but where was the story? You have a main character who's supposed to have fans being a paranormal investigator, but instead of doing anything professionally, he goes out there with a flashlight and a video camera? Why? Did his team call in sick that day? Locked the rest of his gear in his car? And then after his scuffle, did anyone believe him? Did any of this really happen? I mean, maybe he was just on hallucinogens and thought he was a paranormal investigator who had a fight with a monster. Maybe at the end when he looks so sad, it's because he's going to go to jail because he's an idiot who called 911 when he was tripping on shrooms. You've got skill, and you can do action, just need to make it make sense now.
That was amazing! I wish i could draw like you!
Wasn't very interesting.
I mean, I can barely even tell you why it was bad.
Hmm, I don't think this is anything too amazing, but I think you have the potential for an online serial with this. Sort of like a "supernatural" type thing. This was too short and didn't include much of anything. Although the email at the beginning was interesting. Don't give up, you could make this into something good.
An excellent movie, with some room for improvement
The quality of your environment and your understanding of pace are very good, infact I'd have rated you 10 in that area.
The only thing that could have done with some improvement is the animations, the weakest example being the "paranormal creature's" movement when chasing the protagonist.
The quality of your artwork (not including animations) was average, however I feel if you had taken a little bit more time on the artwork or perhaps approached it from different angle or style the result would have found more traction with your audience.
Overall, I enjoyed your flash and keep working on your skills.