Everything anyone could ever hope for in a first submission. You can keep at it just how you are, or decide to direct and have another artist animate for you. That's why there are directors and actors. Truly epic films take crews.
i haven't a clue what the balls just happened but it was a nice action sequence.
it gave me some goosebumps a little for that you deserver something better.
Great job for a first submission
The synching was pretty decent, the action and suspense were good, and art-wise the style was simple but effective. I'd definitely keep at it!
I feel the animation could have been tweeked a little better and the creature at the beginning looked.......lame (sorry).
Still, u put alot of effort in it and i look forawrd to seeing your next flash