I love what you are trying to do here, being able to catch the design of it being a TV show. One problem with this, however, is how the body parts of the characters are placed and how they become easily skewed from side angles. You have to let artwork flow smoothly when making art. Work on your characters from mutliple camera angles to get the hang of this.
Another problem would be how the characters act towards certain aspects.
The main character, Blane, is under attack by a giant ass turtle after his town burned down. You want emotions to naturally flow from a character, so it would have been a good thing to show how sane he is and freak out alittle.
You know, a little "Oh shit" to his face and such.
Another moment is when he meets Jai. Naturally, Jai would not invite the kid to his place without knowing WHY he is in the woods anyway. But I digress...
Overall, good idea. You have something nice working here. Keep it up.