not bad
good idea but the drawing could have been better :D
Author Comments
Alright fellas' ? First animation i've made and i'm proud of it. Lets see if you think it's good to eh?
Oh and the music is by Rise Against - Paper Wings, so all credit to them for that.
Not bad.
It certainly loaded fast, and I can defiinitely see the effort you put into it. It's rather rough around the edges, but this is still really good. Plus, that's all to be expected with a first submission.
lol
cool enough
^_^
YES!!! FINALLY A PERSON MAKES A FIRST SUBMISSION SOMEONE COULD BE PROUD OF!!! I am sick of people loading some 7-10 second crap on here and expecting it to pass because its their "first". THANK YOU MAN! Also, Welcome to Newgrounds!
P.S. As a message to those who's "firsts" are like I explained (you know who you are <_<). If even YOU think the submisson is crap... DON'T SUBMIT IT!!!
ZeVanillaBear responds:
Cheers man. Nice to see people giving such great reviews.
Oh and cheers for the welcoming :D
pretty good
for a first flash, for sure. my main problem was the way you created "jeff" so sharply. at the end, when his silhouette is rounded...he should have looked more that fashion for the whole film. well done though.