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MSN combat part 1

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an animation reference of madness (not madness day)

noticed some errors in the animation ...

were some errors that I could not solve T__T

RED BLOOD P 369 (c) 2009

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lol

its me or u talk spanish .__. yeah i think XD

Not bad

The overall idea was alright, but the animation could definitely use some work

hee he

it's kinda good for your first work :)

red-blood-p369 responds:

hehe thanks

Work on the artwork

Some of the animation was smooth. The artwork is a little muddled and it makes it hard to make out what is happening sometimes. Dont know if one of the errors was the huge blood spot after one of the first shots, but shrink that down a little and make sure the character goes in front of the blood and not the other way around.

red-blood-p369 responds:

I'm wrong, I put that and then I could not fix more

should have been a game

the drawing/animation could have been better
and
this just seems like it should be a game rather than a movie to me
you should make it a game and resubmit

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3.06 / 5.00

Uploaded
Aug 28, 2009
10:08 PM EDT