umm

What in the seven circles of hell was that.

For a first flash it's good, but it's a bit... odd.

Umm...

Hey, most are rite abt your flash: you arent a bad animator, but lets face it, having a dude with red eyes suddenly smash into a dude, then crush him with a truck in a short 15 to 20 seconds isnt entirely the most attracting/appealing thing. Have a story next time, or even better, flashy stuff; if there is one thing everyone likes, is epileptic lights/ flashes. You could rip the explosion sprites off MS, but really, this could be quite good.

Eh, Ok..

Like i say usaully, dont mind the stars, i just give what it deserves. im not saying ur a bad animator by giving 2 stars just saying u need to polish ur skills. there are many things wrong with this, but with first flashes, theres usaully alot wrong. but please take this as constructive criticism. 1. too short (some of these have been previously listed im just recapping lol) 2. movement was very sketchy, dont worry about getting it done in a certain time, take it easy and work slow. 3. the name of the flash doesnt really symbolize the story, it says maplestowy repaired, what was broken and why was there a fight? 4. get a backround! it doesnt have to be all flashy and gawdy, just something noticeable lol and thats all i have to say. just take your time doing flashes and dont be afraid to get ur hands dirty in some detail! im sure youll have alot more to offer in the future luigihyuga. ill keep my eyes peeled for ya later in the portal!

~Yunganirish

not so good...

but at least keep it on newgrounds =\

Right....

You need to put more work into that. 1. its too short. 2. it needs more fluctuation. 3. it just needs revising. Try again and make it longer. Good try.