The voice really works for the story. Maybe it would be better in the audio portal, but whatever, it works.
Ziltch from me, bro.
WTF is this? Look, that voice would have been suitable if it were Clock Day, but it's not. It's honestly very annoying and holds no place. It turned me off from wanting to listen to the rest of the story, in which I struggled for 20 seconds before I cut it off to write this.
Share the story, cool. But don't post this when all it is is a picture and a computerized voice that makes your ears bleed.
Maybe you'll do better next time. We'll see.
I don't know about this one. The voice is kinda distracting, and of course the stationary picture kinda ruins the otherwise entertaining story.
Great classic story but just one problem...
I'm giving the story a passing grade on the merits of the story alone but I would recommend that if you follow this up with another that you work on having a realistic voice tell the story.
I'm not sure if CATS (from Zero Wing) or someone from Anonymous is telling it but it doesn't work well and makes the story being told very hard to understand.
Not much here
I gave it 1/1 because it had some kind of funny parts, but otherwise there is nothing to look at here. It is just a picture of The Great Wall with a poor voice over. Try adding a little more to this so there is more to look at than just a stationary picture.