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Ag-ep.1-"to Burn A Soul"

rated 3.18 / 5 stars
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Aug 17, 2009 | 11:40 PM EDT

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Shockazula Everybody!

Anyway, The whole episode is how the characters were created a few years ago, about 5-6.

I left an extra clip in the credits hidden as a "Bonus Bolt", so try to find it.

The reason why I wanted to make this series is to tell my stories and ideas the best way I can using Flash 8 and other various programs, to spread my internet psuedonym throughout the world, and to make a little cash on the side if it gets quite popular within the coming months.

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Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

The grey , clouds this odd picture of a story.

Me be the all powerful one of wierd cliffs you know. Ye told me of this flash. Quite considerably it could use alot of smoothing in the look, the movement is , well, fine. The concept wasn't very well conceived , but avid in conveying i suppose. Even though this is one of your beggining works. Use alot of effort into making somthing as perfect as you can , And it doesn't really matter how long as long as you do put a ton of effort. This hopefullly with sharpen your skills. I am a harsh judge

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Jakit-Sol responds:

that you are. that you are.


Rated 3 / 5 stars


To be honest, I'm not sure about this. I like the idea behind it and the animation is okay. The guy's voice was mentioned in an earlier post and I aree with them. The main isusse I have with it is it's real short and it to direct. Personaly I like some fluffy details not things so quick. Keep it up though you might have something here.

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Jakit-Sol responds:

thanks for that! but dont worry, i will make the next one better than this.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

ok, i kinda liked it bit...what was that about?

seriously, what WAS that about exactly. I don't really follow. It was good, but, I need explainations.

Jakit-Sol responds:

storywise, a few years back i made my sister some alchemical rings. she wasnt impressed with them and then made a bet with me that if i could make something useful, id get $20. two weeks of research and experimentation later, i made a "Soul Fire" and later named him Flame. (not very creative, i know)

But when he came to be in a fiery explosion, i had suffered severe burns external and internal. for some reason, the burns couldnt be healed by modern medical science, so my sis looked at some of my books, put on the rings, got some rabbits from the woods, and then did a human transmutation. that made my character a human/rabbit chimera, and it healed my burns. but i freaked the hell out when i saw the after effect of my sisters work. that and the orange bat-cat that wields a sword, he's a pet i made called Calcifer.

If you think this episode was good in a few ways, dont worry, i will make these better and they'll have better dialouge.


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

kinda boring

the guys voice sounds like garbage but ok on everything else

Jakit-Sol responds:

yeah, sorry if you lost interest throughout the middle, but this pilot was just for backstory. the auido clips for my character were made as .WAVs using Audacity. do you know a way to make the sound clips better so the next episode will be more interesting?