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Hey! It took Me a long time to submit another cartoon, But I did it! Oh and I'm really sorry about the file size, But I've gotten a lot of comments about My sounds quality, So I had to boost up the file size in order for the sounds to be less fuzzy. I know its not much, But I hope you enjoy it!

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Sweet!

This was hilarious! for not having the best graphics this was really funny! i hope to see more!

i give a 10

because it made me laugh and was really unpredictable. i dont care much for really great graphics or whatnot as much as if a cartoon can make me laugh(which this one did)..cant wait till part 2

Agentluke responds:

Thanks! you see thats what i was aiming for, just a funny thing for people to watch, The kind of thing blind people can laugh at if you get what i'm saying! :P

Pretty funny actually

Was pretty funny at some parts. Just work alittle bit on some of your edges, and maybe make the subtitles alittle easier to read. Other than that, i Cant wait to see some of your next movies.

Agentluke responds:

thanks! well so far you gave me the highest score! and for that i thank you!

Was alright

but you call that a scottish accent!?! I should post a voice acting thing in the audio portal

Practice make better!

Visuals: This was not very well drawn. It looked like you have just drawn a picture on paint, and then animated the mouths only.

Sound: The sound was actually pretty good, I could hear mostly everything the characters was saying.

Plot: I really did not get if it was supposed to have any plot, but guess it wasn't.

Humor: This was clearly a humoristic flash, but it was not very funny. By that I do not mean that your jokes wasn't funny; they where just out of porportion AKA not timed right. Making humoristic flashes is all about timing. Everything seemed to happen really slow. Example: In the start you could have done this: "Somewhere...at some time...two men was sitting in a car(immediatly followed by a shift of scenery)RIGHT HERE!!!!!!(then fast to the scenery of the men in the car)" Infact, if you speed this up, it may start look like a parody of egoraptors AWSOME series. I do take respect giving the viewers time to understand the jokes completely, but please don't give so much time that it will become boring.

Overall: I did not find this as a very good flash, but I see potential humor-vise, so please submit more and I'll be happy to watch it. Thought about giving this a 3, but because of the spelling-nazi I am, I have to take points for bad grammar in the subtitles.

Keep up the good work!

Agentluke responds:

Hey thanks for the comment! yeah I try hard but I can't seem to muster up very good artwork and animation. I think I'll have to take some money out into buying a newer version of Flash, Because i'm pretty sure mine is out-dated, but for some reason it won't give a smooth tween. Well anyways, Thanks for the advice! I'll try to apply it to my future submissions!

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Votes
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Score
3.43 / 5.00

Uploaded
Aug 17, 2009
6:58 PM EDT