(title in work)

Hehe, it was quite funny seeing strawberry go for the porker rather than the others. However, the one thing that this is missing the most would be some dirty and inappropriate dialogue from strawberry. I think this definitely would have been much better if he had said something comical throughout this.

Needs more

I wasn't very fond of the music at the beginning, but the idea was pretty funny. It was pretty short, however, as the other reviewer said, and the plot could be improved, such as having some speech.

Happy Clock Day!

10/10
~ Z

really funny

yet its extremly short, other then that its really good