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Animation dedicated to my younger brother and his love for playing call of duty. This is my first submissin to newgrounds please bare in mind i a 10...enjoy!...
Your 10 and your younger brother plays CoD?
I dont expect anyones first submission to be good, so long as they strive to be better. But srsly, dont let him have a mic ever. Unless he's cool and dousnt scream that he's the master. This Rev is gonna be rated useless, but Keep it up, dont make stuff without thinking you improved on something.
First of all, I can't really say I liked it. Then again, you're just 10 years old and it's your first submission, so I'm going to rate it accordingly. It was also really sweet that it was dedicated to your brother, although it was a bit sick that you put in the "XXXPORNXXX", as you're 10 and you rated this "All Audiences".
The animation was... quite non-existent. The lip-syncing was quite okay, but the drawings and other animation, brace yourself, sucked. Work on your art and animation skills, I'm sure you'll make something good and nice-looking.
The shops were a nice addition, but the fact that not everything was coloured and I could often see the background instead of an alley or something was a real bummer.
The music was not so good, except for the last one, in the credits. You could've improved the export settings so the sounds sounded a bit better though, you could've made the frames per second higher too (16 to 25).
Most of the humour was quite childish, although the "Disc Error" was quite funny.
If you were a bit older, I would've definitely been more harsh and probably would've given you a 4/10 and an 0/5. But you're not, so practise and I'm sure you'll make something good.
Err...this is really it?
The Flash is badly drawn,but I couldn't do better.Least ya tried ;P
that'd be a bad day...
not bad for your first flash, sure they'll get better. good work.
You get a 4
Only because you picked 'Fallen Leaves' by 'Billy Talent' as the end song (Best band ever). Animation and story sucked.
Fernando accepts a difficult mission from a suspicious guy who buys him some yoghurt.
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