Unfinished
Guys settle down its not done. And like some others might of said might want to finish before posting because you will get flamed. Gl with making the flash and I look forward to seeing this being finished.
Author Comments
Hey I fixed it up a little. No audio yet but it will come soon. Perhaps tomorrow. Need ideas on how to make the body and stuff. So bring in any ideas as possible. Don't worry if it's stupid or not anything will help.
it could be made bettter
Now, if you E-mail me I will send you a flash file with an anime chin on it. with that this might look like somthing off a DBZ show. What the last moron failed to note is you never actualy sed it was Goku. Persinaly I feel that only linkthy cartoons shuld be on the weeks best. Like my ROBOTECH Episode 9 for example. But sence people love DBZ soo much they put some perty crapy stuff up here. If you learn to drawl some bodys, fix the chin, and make it about a minit 30 seconds long, it will do much better.
Before Submitting Another Test....
...go to the New Grounds BBS. There you will find alot of people who make flash. You can post your questions there and maybe you will find someone friendly enough to look at your animations and give you some feedback. I am affraid that by submitting "trials" to the portal you will only get the opinions of children who have nothing better to do than make others feel bad. Good luck and keep trying.
Snoogans!
demiltja responds:
Hey thanks for the review. I was just getting the idea of what people thought about the animation so far. Any suggestions on how to pan from one side to the other? Well thanks for the review.
Well,
To make it better, I suggest you try to make the head more like a head and less like a circle. As for the body, I'd just look at different pictures of Goku and try to make it as much like that as possible. Truthfully, I think you should wait until you have an actual movie done instead of submitting a seconds long animation of a head, as people tend to get annoyed by that.
demiltja responds:
Thanks for the info. I've tried making the body but it just doesn't come out right. Well I guess it takes a lot of practice in order for it to work. Thanks for responding as well. Usually I just get votes and not reviews which I think should be done in order for NG to become even better.