I HATE IT.............

bad animation!! BAD STORY!!! its bad!!! ONLY IF MY VoTE WAS STRoNG ANOUGH TO BLAM THIS!!!! well wat u can do is make up something better (funny or exiting).....that piece of $%&@ was like 20 seconds!!! but realy no offense.........
u do have potential but u need some tutorials and some more creativity... keeep on animating!!

hmmmmm...

you have great potential inside you and i can see it coming out but with a bit of practice you could be great...like like krinkels great... or eddsworld great.... so i see good things in your future.

continue on.

Not Bad

Really not too shabby. The only problem I really had was that it ended too abruptly.

It would be nice to see you come back to this sometime and rework the animation (which isn't really all that bad) to work in some facial stuff.

I wish your brother the best over there!

thereare somethings missing

1) The characters don't have faces.
2) There is no logical point in this flash.
3) It is to short.