That's A Stitch.
I don't normally laugh that loud.
Not during flash movies anyway. I found that to be absolutely awesome. I mean the animation didn't have a huge amount of actual motion, But it was still an awesome story. A simple short. As I said, I don't laugh hard often with flash movies, But this one definitely hit that spot.
'I'll just.. Die. Over there by the childrens toys.'
Awesome. I think you could use more depth within your animations though. Shorts are always good and funny to watch most of the time, But you have potential to really go one better with some small improvements. I think you should focus on.
- Altering your drawing style, mildly. The way your currently doing it makes it seem a bit sketchy. Maybe look into the idea of making your drawings more 'cartoon' style. And just mixing it up and seeing which looks best.
- Better stories.. Or even better, A series! I say this to a lot of people I review, for the simple fact that this is what gets most people off the ground. If your capable of starting a good series on Newgrounds, Your names going to spread!
- Another thing I say fairly often when writing reviews, Because this can be the decided between a daily trophy, or not. I think you should get yourself a voice actor. Your quality of Audio is currently a bit poor. A lot of good voice actors are around the site, And you should collaborate with them.
I hope you take this into account. Good luck with this all :)